My Beloved Em Dash—In the News
My favorite punctuation mark—meant to highlight important bits—has become the important bit itself. Let’s look at the AI issue.
Most business communication faculty probably know by now that the em dash has been viewed as a marker for cheating with ChatGPT and other Gen AI. Turns out, the dash is a weak indicator, if one at all. Let’s remind students that AI mirrors existing writing, including writing that uses and overuses the em dash.
An Insider Higher Ed contributor warns about overuse—in an article entirely em-dash free, which I find both laudable and disappointing:
[A]s writers, we should be connecting thoughts smoothly and taking care to use just the right punctuation for a specific purpose while resisting the allure of an em dash that might save us the expert work of choosing the precisely placed period, comma, parenthesis, semicolon or colon.
I see her point, but sometimes the em dash is the perfect mark, isn’t it? In my example before the indented quote, I see awkward alternatives:
An Insider Higher Ed contributor warns about overuse in an article entirely em-dash free, which I find both laudable and disappointing: [modifier problem: the overuse isn’t in the article, obviously]
An Insider Higher Ed contributor warns about overuse. In an article entirely em-dash free, which I find both laudable and disappointing, she writes the following: [needlessly long]
In an article entirely em-dash free, which I find both laudable and disappointing, an Insider Higher Ed contributor warns about overuse: [complicated and too long before we get to the main subject and verb]
Most important, none of these uses my favorite punctuation mark.
Although punctuation isn’t the most exciting business communication course topic, this might be time to discuss the differences among the hyphen, en dash, and em dash. (For geeks like me, you can read this history of the em dash.)
Whatever students decide for their own writing, I hope they don’t cast off the em dash for fear of a plagiarism accusation. We need all tools available for clear, fluid writing.